lori gayheart

word play

The Problem With a Tree September 27, 2011

Filed under: Poetry,Uncategorized — lorigayheart @ 10:40 pm
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That’s the problem with a tree
In the middle of the forest
When suddenly you can see it
Waiting to be noticed.

Seeking for more
Than just to survive
Soaring and reaching
For sun and sky.

The rest of the trees
Crowd with their leaves
The branches and vines
Became tangled with time.

You could move that tree
To stand in glory on its own
But it might not make it
Without the roots it had grown.

And behind it would leave
A deep, dark hole
The forest less than it was
When it was whole.

But forests have a way
Of filling in the gaps
When individual trees
Fall and collapse.

So it might be
The forest will thrive
While the tree on its own
Will struggle to survive.

 

7 Responses to “The Problem With a Tree”

  1. pat burns Says:

    Lori,

    Thanks for sharing your gift of words. Awesome.

    “struggle to survive” hmmmmm

    Did you know Gibran or Hafiz in another lifetime? Your work reminds me of Mary Oliver too.
    you are in the company of the greats

    • lorigayheart Says:

      Wow…thank you, Pat. I was not familiar with Hafiz or Oliver…but I am now. Hafiz’s “I Know the Way You Can Get” and Oliver’s “The Journey” both really spoke to me. I love Gibran, and Rumi.

  2. Dee Says:

    “The Problem With a Tree”-
    Really touched me, deeply.
    Thanks.

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